Such a flawlessly flowing poem!!
A read venting with a unique pace!
the word choice was perfect, unforced, and extremely fantastic.

I love your opening lines a lot, I feel this blaming tone in your words, when you mentioned how he spends his time with you, though you did not ask for it!

your sadness is extremely obvious in your ending lines..I just love the clarity and the relation(conxn) between your thoughts.

It's the one way a reader can feel the real sense of poetry.
Well Done.
Gr8 poem!! 5.5

GREAT WRITE! This was short, yet powerful, which tells us you dont need a lot of words to express and create something great! I think your rhymes worked very very well here which also added to the flow of this piece. A powerful write. Well done!

This poem was amazing it was short but it contained a lot of emotion and really spoke not only to the readers mind but to their heart too

5/5