His Eyes

by Jessie   Nov 16, 2010


I saw them and I fell somewhere new,
I fell into a world where it is just me and you,
A world where happiness lies, and love is true,
a world where i learned to laugh, and my heart grew

I saw the kindness as I watched them shine
and I used to glow when I knew you were mine
but fantasy doesn't exist, the real world is unkind
and that old world i knew has been left behind.

I see them now, they're so dull and dead,
and I can see that you worry of what lies ahead,
I wish I could erase all the tears that you've shed
but how can I do that when It's my fault you've bled

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  • 14 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very interesting. At first I thought this would be a cheezy love poem like all the rest but there was a twist at the end that made it unique. You rhyming was really good in this I didn't seem forced at all.

    and that old world i knew has been left behind.
    a world where i learned to laugh, and my heart grew
    ^ Just make sure you capitalize the "I" making sure you poem is grammatically and properly sound will give your poem a clean feel.

    Great job!
    5/5

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