Lovely piece with wonderful images and what more could you ask for.

I agree with Sylvia, as I really loved the many images that you have given the reader to look through and also the emotions you have in it. The flow was really good as was the repetition you used, which I found enjoyable. Overall a wonderful poem that I was impressed with from beginning to the end. Great job and keep writing.

I could see the colors, bright vibrant and beautiful. Your talent to paint a masterpiece in words never disappoints. Brilliant

I love Yanni's music and even more I like the
feel of this poem! A beautiful nature poem that made me sigh as I read it..very well written!