by Sunshine Nov 16, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
A thousand words fail me, |
Can't you not do this to my heart? |
by chind
This almost made me want to bring out my box of tissues and cry. Very beautiful, very sad piece. A well crafted write. |
This poem magnifies the fine line between the literal heart and the abstract so beautifully |
Great job you two. Awesome pieces working together as one is great. Hope more is planned |
by Sylvia
After the changes, the flow is good, the lines all fit together for me personally. I hope others feel the same way because it is a very good representation of the idea for the poem, full of emotion and feelings one might have under the circumstances. |