I am really glad you asked me to do this and I also think that you are very creative and your words in this poem speak out so much and I can feel the emotions pouring out. Everything about this poem was great and in the end I don't think there is anything I would change. 5/5 for sure too ;] Great job and keep writing.

Haven't seen the film but the poem seems to fit the description and for the most part, it is difficult to tell who wrote the lines. There are some lines that seem out of place, no tie in to the line before or after. Some other rough spots close to the end of the poem. These few things affect the flow of the poem for me.

After the changes, the flow is good, the lines all fit together for me personally. I hope others feel the same way because it is a very good representation of the idea for the poem, full of emotion and feelings one might have under the circumstances.

Great job you two. Awesome pieces working together as one is great. Hope more is planned

This poem magnifies the fine line between the literal heart and the abstract so beautifully

This almost made me want to bring out my box of tissues and cry. Very beautiful, very sad piece. A well crafted write.

"I awake to the sound of your voice,
though you're gone but you still live on inside me. "
- these two lines are just perfect.

I absolutely loved this piece, beautiful work people!

Can't you not do this to my heart?

God,what a beautiful piece...
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