Beautiful poem

I agree with Britt. Unbelievably fantastic! Your write has a strong meaning and is written beautifully. The emotion I felt nearly made my heart stop. I loved how you used 'un' words at the end of your stanzas, it made your write all the more powerful! Lovely write. 5/5

This is a beautiful poem, going from confusion, to fear to understanding and acceptance. I feel that we should all accept death when it comes for us. it kind of made me think about my poem Silence Now. 5/5

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Beautiful Poem!
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