We could be the perfect two.

by brokenhearted teenage girl   Nov 23, 2010


We would hang out every night.
Look under the stars without caring where we were.
Cuddle and kiss without wondering who was where.
Be who we were without a care of the past.
Smile a real smile, live a real life.
Feel a real love.
But our time has passed.
The moment moved on.
And I'm sitting here wondering,
What went wrong?

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  • 14 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Thanks so much !! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Wow!! I really loved this. There was so much emotion expressed and this one flowed nicely. I love how it was sweet and sad at the same time. Really well done. Keep it up, hunni. (: 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Leigh

    Aww its kinda sad .. But i like the whole poem. Its like ur hoping it went back the way it was.

  • 14 years ago

    by Leigh

    Aww its kinda sad .. But i like the whole poem. Its like ur hoping it went back the way it was.

  • 14 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Thanks ! :)

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