Comments : We could be the perfect two.

  • 14 years ago

    by Clarise

    Love the ending line

  • 14 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Thanks ! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Leigh

    Aww its kinda sad .. But i like the whole poem. Its like ur hoping it went back the way it was.

  • 14 years ago

    by Leigh

    Aww its kinda sad .. But i like the whole poem. Its like ur hoping it went back the way it was.

  • 14 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Wow!! I really loved this. There was so much emotion expressed and this one flowed nicely. I love how it was sweet and sad at the same time. Really well done. Keep it up, hunni. (: 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Thanks so much !! :)