My memories

by La Reina De Corazones   Nov 23, 2010


Why does it feel as if it was just yesterday
that you held me in your arms?
When it's actually been,
A day,
A week,
A month,
A year.
Since I last heard you say "I love you my love"

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  • 13 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Sorry that's how i write when i write it in paper

  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    Very shot but hold alot of raw emotion. I suggest spelling it out to make it easier to read

  • 13 years ago

    by Cupids Got A Gun

    Wow amazing short sweet and to the point i am dealin w. this right now so very good 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Short and beautiful but, instead of saying holded you should use held. Another was in the last line instead of "saw you say I love you" try " heard you say I love you" just a couple of suggestions. Once again it is a beautiful poem minus the errors. :)

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