Short and beautiful but, instead of saying holded you should use held. Another was in the last line instead of "saw you say I love you" try " heard you say I love you" just a couple of suggestions. Once again it is a beautiful poem minus the errors. :)

Wow amazing short sweet and to the point i am dealin w. this right now so very good 5/5

Very shot but hold alot of raw emotion. I suggest spelling it out to make it easier to read

Sorry that's how i write when i write it in paper