Lets talk tonight

by East Poetry   Nov 23, 2010


Hello my love,
my precious dear,
There's something that
you need to hear.

I never thought
there'd come a day,
When I would have
to stop and say.

I miss your love,
I miss your glow.
I miss the girl,
I used to know.

The one who's smile,
lit up my day.
And made my
sadness go away.

What happened to
the you I met?
The one who'd play,
in every bet.

And even if,
You lost, you'd say.
"I'll win again
another day."

lets talk tonight,
I'll set you free.
I promise you
can vent to me.

I'll understand,
I'll make you smile.
and even if
it takes a while.

I promise I will
be right here.
To set you free
and in the clear.

To fix our love,
to prove it's true.
because I know,

that I love you.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    Wow that's soo sweet! I hope everything turns out

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This was heartfelt, written with real love.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I'm in agreement with Lemma. :)
    It is a great message of hope and love. Such sweet words in all honestly. <3

    "I'll understand,
    I'll make you smile.
    and even if
    it takes a while.

    I promise I will
    be right here.
    To set you free
    and in the clear.

    To fix our love,
    to prove it's true.
    because I know,

    that I love you. "

    Loved this bit. I've done this a number of times.

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very well written well structured romantic poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Lemma

    I really can't fault this. It carries a great message of hope and love without waffling or symbolic imagery. Don't get me wrong, imagery is great but I also love when poetry just does what it says on the tin and clearly comes from the heart. 5/5 every time from me. xx

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