Comments : Lets talk tonight

  • 13 years ago

    by Lemma

    I really can't fault this. It carries a great message of hope and love without waffling or symbolic imagery. Don't get me wrong, imagery is great but I also love when poetry just does what it says on the tin and clearly comes from the heart. 5/5 every time from me. xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very well written well structured romantic poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I'm in agreement with Lemma. :)
    It is a great message of hope and love. Such sweet words in all honestly. <3

    "I'll understand,
    I'll make you smile.
    and even if
    it takes a while.

    I promise I will
    be right here.
    To set you free
    and in the clear.

    To fix our love,
    to prove it's true.
    because I know,

    that I love you. "

    Loved this bit. I've done this a number of times.

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This was heartfelt, written with real love.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    Wow that's soo sweet! I hope everything turns out