Pretty, and very emotional. I could automatically feel the intensity. Great work, I can tell you put a lot of heart into it.

Every once in a while you read a poem that just grabs you..this is one of them. I went all quiet inside as I read it and was dissapointed whe I had finished it, because I wish it had lasted longer.

I love how it is so decriptive and so grand.

This is beautiful, so very beautiful:)

5/5 Ingrid

Congrats, well deserved win!

I am speachless.. no comment would be worthy of this masterpiece

You took the reader to the very spot you wrote about. Through your words we experienced everything and enjoyed the imagery.
An excellent poem and a real true winner
congrats.

Congrats on a well deserved win :)
Take care
Cindy

Congrats ; 1st of all.
Sorry for the late comment.
Anyhow.. I as Ingrid; felt disapointed because of the silence that I was enjoying as I was reading your piece.

It reminded me of "the lady of shalott poem" by Alfred Lord Tennyson .

http://charon.sfsu.edu/tennyson/tennlady.html

SO BE PROUD!!

The word choice was perfect; flopped between perfection and excellence.

The imagery was of a high quality; no doubt.

And the wording reflected such a very unique talent.
I admired each single expression; because of the creativity in it.

None of your lines sounded forced and that is enough to give you credit.

I had some parts speaking to me loudly..
and some louder..and then I founded myself sinking deep inside the expressions andd the Settings of your poem.

The cold; nature; and title all took me into another world; a very inspiring poem that deserved nothing less than an in-depth comment!!

And I won't end this before I ASSURE you that it was very original and unique; it was something that we never pass by often.

a poem with a strong structure; obvious coherence; outstanding expressions; lines that would give you goosebumps; and word choice that can never bore you!!

I am a fan of this poem and I look forward to read more; and see more poems pierced at the front page of P&Q.

I hope my words make your day; cause I meant each single one.

Keep this astonishing work.

5/5/well of-course

Wow...your very good:D..i like it

Nice 10/atw

I feel so small seeing such big poems, I wich I can be able to write like that someday good work 5/5