Powerful words you have written. Every moment a victory or loss, sometimes there is surrender where you neither win or lose. Even in surrender by staying strong, you will survive. Well done.

A very powerful poem written in so few lines and yet you have captured the essence of war and the brutality of it. The imagery is good for such a short poem and also the way you went about writing it was unique and creative. Many emotions could be wrought from this poem but the one I felt the most was a sense of melancholy. Great job and keep writing.

I really enjoyed reading this even though I define war in a different way lol. We are responsible. But I liked how you defined it as well, it all depends on the person. Nice write deary :] Nik

My powerful warrior you have done it again. One day you'll make changes to this world of our. I hope to be among your army, what a powerful leader you will make
excellent poem