by Soft Parade Nov 27, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I see you by the printer, |
by D
I like this, good flow :) |
by Lori
Beautifully written. I loved how well the words flowed :) great word choice as well! |
It a better piece, and I'm glad you filled out the story. At first, when I was reading the first couple of the new lines, I thought it was all just going to be sexual, but it didn't continue, and so I was glad. |