Comments : Take Me

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Absolutely beautiful! I really did enjoy this piece, its warm and very touching =)
    The flow is spot on and the stanzas carry through into each other perfectly!
    A well deserved 5/5!

  • 14 years ago

    by Chris

    A great write. It flows really well and the stanzas are set up nicely. Granted love is different for each person this describes the basic feeling really well. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Dustin Stanley

    This is ..... Amazing, only word for it. I have know this feeling before and never have I been able to capture it in words. Bravo

  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A very well written poem. The flow and structure was well kept in this fast-paced piece. I was pleasantly surprised. Well done.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.

  • 13 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Aw!!! Sweet... I love poems that are penned with sweetness and true feelings. Captivating! God bless you!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 13 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Hmm

  • 13 years ago

    by SWEET PEA 318

    TOTALY BUITIFUL... I WONDER WHO ITS ABOUT.... LOL.... PROBABLY THAT STUPID HICK UR ALWAYS TLKIN TO LOL REALLY REALLY GOOD

  • 13 years ago

    by Cody B

    Hey, nice job! I really like the flow and emotion/cuteness in this poem. You're a good writer!

  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    Nice love poem