I cant feel you at all. </3

by brokeheartgirl   Nov 29, 2010


** just playing around writing stuff**

My heart shattered all around,
Tears keep pouring down like November rain,
Pictures still on the walls,
I begin to feel a little shaky;
And then i began to fall.

Where are you when i need you to catch me?
Your gone now,
And I cant feel you at all. </3

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  • 13 years ago

    by TheVampire

    I really like this... because I can relate to it.
    Keep playing around with writing!

  • 13 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Oh gosh sorry, I meant to type, 'keep on writing guy'

    lol sorry

  • 13 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Short, sad, and sweet. I LOVED IT!
    :)
    Keep on writing girl :)

    Kisses!
    -Hannah

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