by Dark Secrets Nov 29, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
Thy art the tiny spider |
by Tara Kay
I thought the repition was a good touch, you really helped the flow this way, I liked the wording, reminded me of William Shakespeare with those lines "Why Art Thou" |
by The Queen
I liked the title, totally fits the poem. This is a very powerful piece, the repetition was effective, and I especially loved how you ended this in a positive way. :) |