I liked the title, totally fits the poem. This is a very powerful piece, the repetition was effective, and I especially loved how you ended this in a positive way. :)

I thought the repition was a good touch, you really helped the flow this way, I liked the wording, reminded me of William Shakespeare with those lines "Why Art Thou"
I love the touch of the spider, and the ending which was mpre positive than expected, a really great piece Zahra
xxx