by Meena Krish
This is a new and interesting form and the |
by Jad
A sad, long story. The betrayal of Christ is so evident in this piece and I love how you were able to implement it into every verse that you wrote. On a side not, I really like the form that you use but to be frank I don't think I will every try it as I don't like the structure that it leaves the poem in. You did a fine job and I am impressed on how well you were able to do. Many emotions can be gotten from this piece such as hatred, betrayal, and sorrow. I love every bit of it. Great job and keep writing. |
Betrayal is the most vicious of all the acts of man. |
Betrayal is the most vicious of all the acts of man. |
by shobhana kumar
Wow, Sylvia! i've never heard of this form! very interesting. |
by Ingrid
What a nice format, it has much power and indeed the bible has many truths in it..Judas still lives on in all those who sell a friend to save either their own skin or that of their next of kin. How true. |
by Cindy
Sylvia |
This form is a very interesting one; great job on making another flawless poem. It's sad what people will do for money and how easily they will break trust without considering the consequences of their actions. |
This isn't a form of writting that I have come across before so it is a little new to me still I found it rather interesting and I felt your poem did the from justice. I agree with what cindy above me has said about people we thought we could trust |