My Love Will Last Forever

by BehindTheSmile   Nov 30, 2010


I say I'll love you forever
With all my heart and soul
But you said I don't want to be together
So you gave my heart a hole

My life isn't complete without you
You are my other half
What am I suppose to do
You took away my laugh

We used to talk all night
Now we never talk at all
Im never going to stop this fight
Till you catch me when I fall

I was your blooming seed
Who loved you with all I had
Now you do weed
Why did you turn so bad?

I dreamed one day we would be married
Everything would turn out fine
Now that thought is barried
Never again will you be mine

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  • 13 years ago

    by hasan ali

    Surely if u help :P

  • 13 years ago

    by BehindTheSmile

    Haha yes :))

  • 13 years ago

    by hasan ali

    Yeah ...... so ll i to get tat simplicity which u hav in excess :)

  • 13 years ago

    by BehindTheSmile

    Ok thats good, ill try that next time :)

  • 13 years ago

    by hasan ali

    This was gud but i guess in the middle u took too many thngs but wasnt able to relate them effectively ........u shud use 1 or 2 ideas and circle around them n create a scene so that reader gets lost in that....... :)

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