This is really cool. Good job. And yeah poems are all of that if not much more.

I guess there is a proper way to write poems, forms, format etc, but to me, whats in the heart, what cry's out to be heard is poetry.
Keep sharing your heart. Take care

That is lovely i enjoyed it ill keep reading more[:

Great :)

Wow! I really love this piece! Short but detailed....great work=)

Short, simple, but right to the point. poetry is a really good way to express your life. 5/5:)

Awesome poem (: