As I look out my window, these are the images I see this morning and you have made them even more vivid with this little gem. The only thing missing is the ocean, guess the pool will have to suffice for this day. Well done.

Beautiful job, its amazing how few words can create such amazing imagery =)
5/5 your a very good poet!

A terrific overview of nature

Lovely! have always loved controlled forms of poetry, for they seem to bring out the best in a writer!

lovely portrait of the sun, there!

An inspired subject, Beautifully painted...

"cascade from dark orange tints"
could very appropriately be changed to:

cascade from a dark orange tint

and then, you would have the syllables
you require for this form...

Wow jad..hope this poem WIN!..
I so loved the picture, Tanka is not a very easy form.
and your ideas in this form flowed so wel, unforced with a very gd imagination.

/i love your creativity jad..this poem is just amazing aust!

well done
5/5 sure excellent job

Austin
Nice job on the Tanka :) Great imagery!
Take Care
Love Cindy

I could see it all in front of me, hun:)

Good work on both the format and the wording.

5/5 Ingrid

Can't tell you how much I loved the expression of the clouds blushing, so beautiful. Another outstanding nature poem.