Hahahah this poem gives me images..of a dad sitting at home with his head in his hands... Thinking..and then scenes of a wild teenager partying like crazy... Well done :) its exactly what happens when you're young...and then,the turning point is expressed so well in this poem! Bravo!

I think this poem is very well done, you've made some wonderful points and your voice is heard well. I like the speed of the poem as well as the descriptions, very vivid. Great write.