Comments : Our Rainbow

  • 13 years ago

    by hasan ali

    Cool .......i really likd this 1 :)
    ful of thoughts .....n always kept ma attention :)
    nice job 5/5
    for sure :)

  • 13 years ago

    by hasan ali

    Cool .......i really likd this 1 :)
    ful of thoughts .....n always kept ma attention :)
    nice job 5/5
    for sure :)

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Loved this one! It is a perfect love poem. I loved how you described it and used a rainbow to show you felt happy and safe and secure because this person just lit up your world. nice write. :)