by heather Jun 19, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Let me in your heart. let me know whats on your mind. How do you expect me to help you if you wont even tell me whats wrong. |
by BaybeBlew
Hey, not a great great peom, but it was alright, you should try re-writting this? making it longer or putting a bit more thought into it. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, I hope you don't think of it that way. Anyways, keep writting, I'll check out some of your other poems. Toodles |
by Just Ariel
a good poem short but good I hope he tells you whats wrong in the end |