A very sweet and short poem. I love the message of this poem and I like the stanza format you also have it in. Makes it flow nicely. The message is so true though. We should always be grateful for every little thing we get or someone does for us. This poem also is very thoughtful if you looks at it in a different perspective. Great job and keep writing.

This seems to me like a tribute to one's parents although it can be for friends and other relatives. We sometimes don't show the gratitude to them for loving and caring for us. Well done.

I think this poems speaks of a tender and kind hearted person that just happened to write it. awesome job

Raj
What a beautiful piece :)
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

A triple Senryu!!

and so Deeply Meaning Full...
Bravo!

This is very sweet and well crafted, to give credit where credit is due is always important, for the here and now and for the future. Lots of people forget their helpers once they have arrived, in wahtever way possible.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

I absolutely loved this senryu chain, it was well-constructed and left a smile on my face. Enough times we do not thank even the simplest of deeds and at times we forget who is really important in our daily life.

Keep writing always and forever.

God bless you and your family this Christmas.

MaryAnne