Comments : You and I

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This well written lyrcal poem cooks up quite a lot of passion

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    Liked how you make that entire piece. this is the perfect picture of a married man! great job, it flowed well great lines, awesome as always

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Hey, this is really great. It is full of emotions and I can really feel your love for her.

    Lets make dinner,
    you and I.
    I can't cook,
    but I can try.

    ~ This part is amusing and very romantic. For which girl won't melt when her guy try to cook?

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Very cute:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Unfair truly.
    You make me miss my bf. :( We love cooking together. Such a cute poem! :) Honestly, I love your love poems. They are my faves.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is beautiful, your choice of words was amazing and your description of what and how you will do with your loved one was amazing.