Jealousy

by bengali gurl   Dec 1, 2010


I made it through and she already knows...

See how fast the jealousy grows...

She cant hide it, it clearly shows...

Damn i'm shocked from my head to toes...

Didn't expect her to trip so low...

That ho3 is trying to stop my blood flow...

It's the aim of her life now i suppose...

Jealousy is like a drug and she's overdosed...

Keep it coming because i'm not alone...

God is on my side so go give devil a blow..u ho3...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I quite liked the first three lines, but after that, it was hard to keep focused, because there were no dynamics of the rhyme, and it just because monotonous. Justdging by the level of your first three lines, I think this could've been a great poem had you changed the rhymes.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.