by bengali gurl Dec 1, 2010
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life, society
I made it through and she already knows... |
I quite liked the first three lines, but after that, it was hard to keep focused, because there were no dynamics of the rhyme, and it just because monotonous. Justdging by the level of your first three lines, I think this could've been a great poem had you changed the rhymes. |