This is an amazing poem so filled with emotion

THANK YOU.... Random moment I felt I needed to write, and then this poem came.... where or how I do not know but I appreciate the comment very much!

Hello,

I this poem was a mixture. There were up and downs. Some of the lines were fairly srong, like 'Even if my life was a downhill slope', and there were lines I felt had just been placed there for placement sake, like As I feel my turn around the bend'.

I think this piece could've done will a little more strength behind the lines. Also, there were some points where the flow got a little stumbled, but as I say, there were a few strong lines.

My favourite stanza was the forth one.

Brad

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