Comments : Sedimentary Thursday

  • 13 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Your words are singular, unusual, striking - they leave me stunned. It's been a while since I've read something different than I'm used to... and so I'm glad to have come across your writing because it's refreshing. A breath of fresh air. A delicious breeze I can inhale and relish :)
    You better win the weekly with one of your poems! You deserve recognition!

    ........ Each line of this poem is a treasure. I wouldn't change a thing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    The still snow, like valleys of woven wool,
    lay unchanged in their semblance

    ^^
    this line alone is worth a 5 out of 5:)

    Well written, MaryAnne!

    5/5 Ingrid