by jennifer Dec 4, 2010
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
I built this haven such a peaceful place |
by jennifer
Thanks yea a lot of my poems could be worded better |
by Jessie
I really like this poem, although when you switched the rhyming scheme it threw me off. You have great imagery, but "as pretty as a dove" seems forced, I feel it could either be worded better, or choose a different word to play around with.. |