by Emilina Dec 5, 2010
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I'm so scared to tell you how i feel |
I felt the structure and the beginning and the end was off, and to be honest, when I began reading this, I was very tempted to just stop reading because the flow was so awkward. But then I read a few more lines and it go better. Then towards the end, it broke down again. |