A very thought provoking piece to say the least. Describing your surroundings and also your feelings during a song is interesting and quite creative. I love the way you described the church as it gives the reader a place to envision all of the things you have talked about. The emotions in this piece are ranging from joy to sadness to mixed emotions. I love them all as it creates a sense of solemn silence when there is so much noise. All in all, I love the many abstract images you create and also the message of the poem all together. Great job and keep writing.