As a poem, this piece was very unbalanced and awkward, but you're subject matter was where the power lied. I myself have written a poem or two about poetry and about the way things work here. Everyone wants to be voted a five, and if you do that for them, they'll do it for you, and that's it. No one cares about actually having a good piece anymore, they all just want the votes. I'm always getting stick because i vote and comment honestly. people forget this is meant to be about sharing poetry, getting constructive criticism, and getting better, not a popularity contest...sorry, went on a bit of a ramble there, but as you can see, I understand.

Brad

P.S.Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.

Lmao ..though this is very funny it is accurate in many ways

Lmao what the hell with me in 2010