by Dontay
U have such a way wit words ^.^ |
by Pamela
You are an amazing writter. |
I must say this poem was so descriptive and captivating... I loved the dream you described, so vivid and imaginative.. I have a fascination with dreams, because I do have interesting dreams, and when something related to my dream occurs, it feels strange! I loved your use of words, and the rhymes were good but sometimes they seemed forced. But the story in this poem was so nice to read... I loved this stanza: |