by Bradley Peter Dec 6, 2010
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Love, romance /
lasting love
Place your bets on who's first to split, |
by mossgirl19
Loved the repetition in here. Great rhyming and flow once again. Sadly, we always hurt the one we love. |
Reading this poem again, I read it with intrigue and fondness. thank you for your comments, and for bringing me back to this piece |
Very nice little rant you have here, and its flow is right on. It is sad that you speak of truth in this write, and no it is not how things should go. Great Job, enjoyed it thoroughly. |