It may just be the moment, but I thought this piece was so good, that I voted it for the weekly contest as well as added it to my favourites.

It was simple, short and powerful. I'm very impressed. I liked it a lot. When I saw the same word being used to rhyme every word, I thought this wasn't going t be very good, but I'm happy to be proven wrong. Even though you didn't really rhyme, and your words were quite basic, and it was such a short piece, I felt this poem had depth, wisdom and maturity. Well done.

Brad

P.S. I'm a promoter of honest ratings and honest comments (hence my motto below that I put on every comment I make) so believe me when I say I rather enjoyed this piece.

P.P.S.Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.

This poem is elemental and profound.
With your forgiveness, it inspired my response:
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1156603