I am so grateful you have stated at the end of your poem what you were trying to relate this to. I would have been lost forever in a sense of nothingness. Anyway what you have said is so true. Many words have been spoken and you have kept to that which must be. The flow of the poem was descent though at times I thought the poem broke off but then regained its structure and few minutes later.

All in all, I found this poem a joy to read and I enjoyed the message of your poem and i agree with it about one hundred percent. Great job and keep writing.

Ron
What a powerful piece you have penned. So much emotion ringing from your words.
Excellent job!
Take care
Cindy

True statement at the end, Religion can not merge with politics. To many people try to do this and it doesn't work. Religion should merge with our lives only.

You should be a avocate for some cause, your poems are powerful absolutely powerful. Have to say, I love poems that are strong in wording and makes one think.
You're in my favorites bro. Awesome

I thougt you were speaking of the old inquisition when i was reading your poem, so I guess I was not too far off. I love your poem, it makes you think and sticks with you. Not many can convey their message the way you do.

Astounding work!