Excellent !
I have not felt this harmony while reading poems lately, except while reading britt's :P.

I was really taken away by this piece, I love the way it felt so familiar, and I so enjoyed each single line.

I have been not feeling good, and somehow...somewhat I have found something I needed while reading these words that you have penned..

Can't say breathtaking, since there ain't no action or suspense but it was MORE than breathtaking , cause I think the way you worded it took me to where the events in your happen has occurred!!

LOVED IT!
I wish I can say more, but you with this talent have said it all!
Good luck for the weekly contest

5/5

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :)

A story that I like!

It has such a melancholic touch to it, sort of like watching a black and white movie....

Well done once again, I can't believe how you just write so many really good poems:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

"she will never leave my blossoming body
even if life shrivels up and stops growing,
her medley of perfect will sprout gloriously."

....................Abssolutely......................