Not sure if I got the message you were trying to get across, But I did get a message none the less. Another emotional piece but with good flavor and there was no pun intended. :] The beauty of this poem is nice and also the imagery in some parts are really good. I love again the simplicity of this poem, though the underlining message for me was not all that plain.

So, I believe, this poem was really nice and though it doesn't stand out as much as some of your other poems it still has your distinct taste and talent imbedded in the lines. Great job and keep writing.

Very touching and sentimental. I think you meant "sonia" = "beloved one" in the language of origin (Hindi). A forme fruste is "sohneya" in Punjabi language.