A passionate piece describing the beauty of nature. it is VERY sensual and at first suggests otherwise.
brilliant descriptions throughout.

"The music of stringed instruments linger
braising ruby lips,
undressing endless beauty
softly by the night."

seems like she's growing more beautiful here, i imagine being highlighted by a sunset or in the serenity of the night.

the second stanza is quite a unique take on rainfall. its as if its an offering of affection to the land. very effective.

i like the third stanza. gives a sense of contentment. "embracing the warmth that lied from within"

correct me if im wrong but it seems that each stanza reflects a season...

Joe
Beautiful and intriguing piece you have penned.
Nice job!

The imagery in this poem reflects well that mother nature is quite a lady

An enjoyable read. I liked what you did with this piece. Unfortunately I don't have any critique or tips to offer so I am sorry this comment isn't very helpful it is just that I think this poem is fine the way it is and in my opinion nothing needs changing.

4/5