Randy
There is so much heartache and sadness contained in this piece. How painful it is to face when the way things use to be are no longer there. The memories we have to treasure forever.
Excellent piece.
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Cindy

A very sad piece that I found to be a very emotional poem. A lot of sadness and pain lurks in between the lines in this poem and it is very evident that this is heart filled. I loved the imagery you used in this poem to describe some of your surrounding, such as the sky in one part. You do a good job with it and make it so real, that one can almost see it. The flow of the poem was really good as well as it gave the reader a good read through without any interruptions.

All in all, I found this a beautifully sad poem that spoke the true heart of someone in pain. Many feelings being torn in this poem. Great job and keep writing.

Randy, you combine nature, sadness, love all in one poem and do it beautifully. The sunset closes the book on one day and those memories made only to give way to a sunrise to start building more memories and another day.

I found many thoughtfull emotions in this poem, penned with imagery , excellent