This most certainly was a different spin on poetry I have seen written. Most people tend not to write about someone's life and most certainly not Batmans. You seem to have done a wonderful job with it though. You were very detailed with what was going on, which I think is key so that the reader can go through Batmans life the same way you did. There were some humor in this piece as well as every day things that might happen to ordinary people, which shows us some hero's are just like regular people.

Overall, I found this a interesting and very descriptive piece. You had many details and you were quite adept at getting the story across. Great job and keep writing.

I knew something was missing when he first went to the batmobile. If only Alfred was there, on vacation I bet, lol. Anyways, this is really enjoyable, one of those you just read while relaxing, listening to Smashing Pumpkins, U2 or Sinatra or somethin, no fuzz and simply enjoying the poem. Great. :D