Comments : Waking Up In Silver

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    When it comes to your poems one never knows what to expect. Your are talented beyond belief but also have your own style, written with originality
    awesome

  • 13 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Nice.. i like how you paraphraze. I like how you use alot of different terms.. nice nice nice! keep up the good work. your a great poet.

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    Wow. I love the second to last stanza and the very last line. That was so well written, I love the images you can create with your words! 5/5!!!

    mandy:)

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    Wow. I love the second to last stanza and the very last line. That was so well written, I love the images you can create with your words! 5/5!!!

    mandy:)

  • 13 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    The perfect exorcism of a bad relationship, a glorious release from the dark cloud that had been haunting you. so vividly and completely portrayed in your poem. Love the imagery of the calm sea here as a metaphor for your new peace of mind.

  • 13 years ago

    by Mary Daphne

    Heart warming.. i felt the pain and relief as well.. it's a work beyond beauty.. very wonderful.. keep it up..

  • 13 years ago

    by Mary Daphne

    Heart warming.. i felt the pain and relief as well.. it's a work beyond beauty.. very wonderful.. keep it up..