At last

by johanna jimenez   Dec 9, 2010


When i hold you close...I hear your heart beat fast.
Hearing your heart beat fast, i think i've finally found "someone" at last.
Suddenly you whisper in my ear~do you know i love you?~
At that moment, the sun became the moon.
The cold became into heat.
My roses weren't red anymore...
Violets weren't blue...
Just because at that moment you held me close and asked me if i knew you love me.
Then suddenly i realized ive finally found that someone at last.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Nice.. keep up the good work. I like this poem very much.

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrew

    I like this poem
    my favorite part was this(At that moment, the sun became the moon.
    The cold became into heat.
    My roses weren't red anymore...
    Violets weren't blue) i like how u emphasize how everything became different with alot bit more polish you'll make a great poet 5/5

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