by Captain HC Dec 10, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Sitting shackled, waiting to fight for his freedom, living is almost impossible with out his demons. thought to be a weakling, bloodied or killed his opponents. prisoner boy. |
by BlueJay
That was really good and otherwise all I can say is wow! |
by Lady Nik
You have nice words hun. Deep emotions powerful owrds. Good diction. But I wouldn't call this a poem. More of a story. I'd think about making your lines shorter. Look at some other poets on the site and see how they word their poems and how the syntax is. That would help you with your pieces. Keep writing though. Nik |
Okay, that was pretty good, |
Thats an interesting story... was the mom the witch?? just curious |