Twin

by sibyllene   Dec 11, 2010


Walking together down a path crowded with moss,
white oaks, and thorny bracken we pause,
alerted to a rustle in the blanketing of
brown leaves.

A deer bounds across the gap, and another
in its wake - twin sable things, moving like
quick breaths in the brush.

One leaps, and I swear it hangs
for a moment in the air, legs taut,
neck arched, looking like a crescendo
of music and all the world's
brightest poetry.

I try and fail to express
that I have never seen,
out in the muddy world, such a clear and
perfect image
of what happens in the lovestruck leaping
of my heart.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Did you know some trolls have two heads, while others can have up to five? They look so freakish, I hope I never meet one.

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ummmm i don't know what to say.....beautiful :-)

  • 13 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    This is just so beautiful!!!
    Nice use of vocabulary.
    Such a work of pure art.
    Well done.
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ....Exquisitely Romantic....
    Full of Nature and Humanity
    Joined Together in Loving Images..
    "looking like a crescendo
    of music and all the world's
    brightest poetry."
    Seeing The Unseen In The Seen...
    Brilliant and,
    did I mention I Love This?

    Quick, SOMEBODY VOTE..
    I'm out of votes!

  • 14 years ago

    by abracadabra

    A classic Sibyllene.

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