by BehindTheSmile Dec 11, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I have 30 pound weights |
by Marvellous
One thing lost, is another gained. Within every scar, healing dwells. |
by VeinsofHate
"I start to get light headed |
by kiara
I really love this even though it's really sad |
I like that.. i would love to write like that to bad im 14 and my mind doesnt work like that yet... |
by Tom Swart
I liked your poem and its form. I took some liberties and hope you won't mind. I took your poem and changed some of the lines. I think if you lost the fist stanza all together your poem would be better. Keep up the good works |