by silvershoes
Your lines about Hector create an image in my mind of him stumbling down the halls, bloody, dying, ruined. It makes my eyes water. Hector was my favorite in the movie Troy and I cry really hard every time he dies... |
6000 years of war....ALL of recorded history.. |
I just reread this, and I now get |
by abracadabra
Oh man. This is good. By "good", I obviously mean some other word that is not encompassed by "good". I actually have your original poem open in another window. Let me compare. |
by Kevin
Great poem. Excellent idea, and the flow and spot on. |
by Madison
Amazing |
You sing from the heart, knowing light and sorrow lies before our paths, in hope and in death, you are the storm and the watcher; still you remain the same. |